its pretty funny.
Her right hip is weird...
Is this from a model or freehand straight from the ol' noggin?
-This ia a really good piece, i love the angle and proportions are perfect, the coloring and gradients are great.
-THE reason I ask is because if you did trace a figure (im not saying its a bad thing, most ppl do that) the area around the nose/mouth is looking slightly off, i think it's the shading.
I like traditional stylized works, so is free hand using various photos from the model (friend). and yes indeed I had a hard time to keep "likeness" as trying different versions on her right hand holding the guitar and the nose :P . thanks again for the vote.
her abs are too much...
Why are their dicks so vein-y?!
His right wrist looks too big...
Hmm, perhaps, but it looks fine to me so I don't really know how to fix it.
From observation? a picture?
Maaan, you def fucked up on the legs, way too long in proportions wise, and her thighs are way too thick compared to her feet and overall body composition....I'd say go back in and re- size em, but thats about it.
Really well coloring and line work.
cool, simple, but her shins are too fat/big compared to the rest of her legs.
Hips should be the widest really. but since you have the legs at that stance, thin up the shins to make her look right.
really? shaneglines.net gets away with it
also those are CALVES, not shins. To be honest I love critique, but when you don't know basic anatomy you shouldn't give critique :(
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